Tuesday, December 24, 2013

Story Time with Deb...Chapter 5

It's Christmas Eve!  Merry Christmas Eve!  I hope you have wonderful plans for the next couple of days, filled with family and friends and maybe a surprise gift or two!

Below is the final chapter in the advent-like story I've posted this month. 

This was Chapter 1 from the first Sunday three weeks ago.

And this was Chapter 2 from two weeks ago.

And this was Chapter 3 from one week ago.

And then Chapter 4 from a couple of days ago. 

Which takes us to Chapter 5...


Chapter 5

Back in the palace, King Nascious and Prince Reed looked at each other a long time.

“We gotta bring ‘em back,” King Nascious said quietly.

“I agree.”

“And the price is high,” added the King.

“I know.  I’ll pay it,” said Prince Reed.  “I love ‘em as much as you do.”

A tear escaped King Nascious’ eye and rolled down his cheek.

“We said that this might happen a long time ago,” Prince Reed added.

“Yes. Yes, we did,” King Nascious agreed.

“When?” asked the Prince.

“Soon enough,” replied the King.

Many years passed.  Iain and Ofelia grew up and had many children.  They also died, just as King Nascious had told them they would.  They never did return to the palace, but just like King Nascious had said, they never forgot about it.  They told their children about the palace, and their children told their children. 

They always hoped they would find that wonderful life again.  Oh, they had glimpses of it.  Every time they played music or every time they went swimming on a glorious summer day, they would remember, but it was never quite the same…never quite as good as when they had been living in the palace.  They made homes for themselves, but no home ever felt like their first home.

And one day, after a very long time, King Nascious came to Prince Reed and said, “It’s time.”

“I’m still ready,” Prince Reed replied. 

“You know you’ll have to leave this way of life and become one of them, right?”

“I know,” Prince Reed said.  “I’m ok with that.  They are worth it.”

And so Prince Reed also left the palace and joined the world outside of the palace – the world where Iain and Ofelia lived after they had left.  Prince Reed even became a baby, raised by one of Ofelia’s great-great-great-granddaughters, too many greats to count at this point in the story.  He had a different name then, because he didn’t want people to see him as a prince.  He wanted everyone to know him like a friend, like a brother.  So his name was Broman in their world.

King Nascious was so happy that Broman had become a baby that the King put a special, bright star in the sky to show everyone where they could find little Broman, because most everyone loves to meet new babies and hold them and coo over them and listen to them laugh.  Babies are just such a great way for people to start!  The King even had a large, bright choir appear from the sky break out in song for some of the people to hear that Broman had been born!

Broman grew up and he met up with Slick from time to time.  Not as friends, you understand, but they would meet up and talk, because Slick didn’t want Broman to ever bring Iain and Ofelia back to the palace, back home.  Slick would try to trick Broman just like he’d tricked Iain and Ofelia so long ago, but Broman knew every one of Slick’s tricks, so he didn’t fall for them.  Slick even went so far as to trap Broman and have him arrested!

Slick told the police to beat up Broman, and so they did.  Slick told the judges that Broman was bad, but the judges couldn’t prove it.  Slick got a bunch of people so upset that they started to demand that Broman be killed.  People made up lies about him, and even his friends couldn’t stop what was happening.  Slick was so happy to see all of his tricks working this time!  He was really going to win, he just knew it!

If Broman was like you or like me, he would have fought back.  He would have told lies about the people who were telling lies about him.  He would have tried to point out the lies and hire lawyers to tell everyone what was true.

But Broman wasn’t like you or me in that way.  Broman was very sad about everything that was happening to him, but he didn’t fight back like we would have.  He was very quiet and didn’t say hardly anything – at least not anything that could have stopped Slick’s plan from working.

And sure enough, Broman did die.   A very cruel death, the worst kind of death anyone could ever imagine, but that is a story for another time.

But Broman wasn’t just Broman.  He was still Prince Reed!  And he still had King Nascious’ dream in mind.  So while I know this is very hard to believe, Broman actually came back to life!  By doing so, he dealt that fatal blow to Slick that King Nascious had said would happen so long ago. 

Slick’s victory was very short-lived.

And you know what?  King Nascious and Prince Reed’s plan worked.  Iain and Ofelia got to return to the palace – to go back home!  Along with lots of other people!  The palace was big enough for everyone, and was more fun than ever since lots and lots of people were there.  And lots of slides were in lots of closets for riding from room to room whenever they wanted to write music or play basketball or go swimming or ice skating or enjoy a bite to eat from the kitchen. 

And this made King Nascious and Prince Reed very, very happy, too.  This was now the happiest day Iain and Ofelia had ever known.  It was the happiest day ever.

The End

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